Sunday, November 11, 2007

Monday's Feature Writer- Our Trip To The Haunted House -Recount Writing

Thump, thump I can hear my heart beating like a drum.
We walked into the evil spooky haunted house. When we got in we heard a really scary noise and I said “It was just Mr Nash” and then we got in the lounge and we saw a spider web and it was stuck in our hair.
Then we went in the kitchen and the kitchen had dishes on the floor and one of us stepped on a glass plate and it had cobwebs on it. Then we went into the bedroom and there was a big hairy beast standing in front of us and Madeline said “It’s only Ginger”.

By Megan

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